I don’t know what it really takes to ignite one’s mind, body & soul.
What it takes to burn oneself to appear bright and stand tall.
What makes one courageous enough to cross all self-imposed boundaries.
To believe in what you always believed was impossible.
To see the unseen. To see the extreme
“its all in your mind” said a grave voice & I believed it almost as instantly as hay catches fire.
The fire had settled within keeping me warm.
It was a challenge, keeping the fire on, keeping oneself warm.
The chances of burning were much more than the chances of warming.
But yet I decided to follow the idea which was yet very charming
And what I got was manifolds my expectations.
Way beyond my imagination.
So now I tell you the story untold…………………………………
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ReplyDeletewow! brilliant lines...
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The fire had settled within keeping me warm,
Though it was a challenge to keep it on,
The chances of burning were (much) more than the chances of warming,
Yet I decided to follow the idea because there was something very charming,
And what I got were manifolds of my expectations,
Way beyond thought, way beyond imagination!