I hate to see you go
to places unknown.
It keeps me stagnant
& makes me moan.
I hate it when i don't
know where will you be.
When i don't know if
i would ever be able to see.
I hate it when i
know that you would surely die
and all i can do is
turn sides & coldly sigh.
I hate to keep myself
in uncertainty.
It becomes impossible
to keep up my sanity.
I hate it when you
even forget my name.
Your love has made me
helpless & lame.
Beautifully written!
ReplyDeletethanx Uma :)
ReplyDeleteAt times, when love goes so painful it is so much better to just let it go! I don't know if there were your true feelings or not, but somehow deep inside me I knew I have experienced this once. We can't live so heavy!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed, brings out the emotions!
hey Sourav
ReplyDeletei would love to keep these feelings close to me cause they bring out beautiful words out of my psyche which hardly happens otherwise. heavy heart will stay heavy till i have feeling of love in my life again. its like one replacing the other.i m waiting for it to happen.
thanx for visiting buddy.
i have many bright love poems as well BTW
i might like them too